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diff --git a/source/know/concept/boltzmann-relation/index.md b/source/know/concept/boltzmann-relation/index.md
index d5409d2..b528adf 100644
--- a/source/know/concept/boltzmann-relation/index.md
+++ b/source/know/concept/boltzmann-relation/index.md
@@ -71,15 +71,16 @@ $$\begin{aligned}
     }
 \end{aligned}$$
 
-However, due to their larger mass,
-ions are much slower to respond to fluctuations in the above equilibrium.
+But due to their large mass,
+ions respond much slower to fluctuations in the above equilibrium.
 Consequently, after a perturbation,
-the ions spend much more time in a transient non-equilibrium state
+the ions spend more time in a transient non-equilibrium state
 than the electrons, so this formula for $$n_i$$ is only valid
 if the perturbation is sufficiently slow,
-allowing the ions to keep up.
+such that the ions can keep up.
 Usually, electrons do not suffer the same issue,
-thanks to their small mass and fast response.
+thanks to their small mass and hence fast response.
+
 
 
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